Sometimes…

Sometimes life isn’t fair
And you feel like it’s going elsewhere
Sure it’s tough and hard to say
Why things have to be this way


Sometimes all you can do is cry
When dreams continue to die
It feels good to sit in the rain
Even to just relieve the pain


Sometimes you want to get away
But bad things end up your way
And you’ll feel like screaming out
Yet you choose, not to shout


Sometimes life is really complicated
And you feel like you’r devastated
But remember, without pain and sorrow
There is no brighter tomorrow!

Offshore Writings

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Published by Offshorewriter

My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

84 thoughts on “Sometimes…

  1. Very rich, uplifting piece, dearest Akka. Simply beautiful! Sorry for the late comment. Just got back from break. Happy enough to read your spiritual work. Extremely inspiring and enriching, as always. Loved it Akka!

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    1. Thank you dearie. 😍😍 Sorry, I missed to reply you. Your comment is always encouraging dear. Glad to see you here. Thanks for asking otherwise I would’ve not replied ever πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  2. It fills me with bliss, to see this post tonight, dearest Preeths. You’ve created such an inspirational and beautiful poem, displaying the qualities of human beingness so lovingly. I love this poem. ❀️❀️❀️

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    1. Thank you dear Jeff. ❣️❣️ You know how to make me smile with your kind words. I am so grateful for your constant support. Thank you for your motivation dear Jeff. πŸ’—πŸ’—

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  3. This is BEAUTIFUL Preeths like you and I’m so happy to read you once again! Welcome back and happy to hear you voice in print my friend!!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒ·πŸŒ·πŸŒ·

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  4. Hello P. ❀️ How are you?
    Indeed sometimes the days are low but we surely get sunny days one day.
    Amazing poem. Great to have you back ❀️

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    1. Thank you dear Daphny. ❣️❣️ Indeed life is like a rollercoaster. Am glad you loved the end and that’s the best thing I can do to end the poem with little positivity. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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    1. Thank you dear Deborah. πŸ₯°πŸ₯° And yes…I feel the same way while I choose to sit in the rain just to let go! Thank you for loving it, I feel so grateful. 🀝

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    1. Thank you dear Sissy. 😍πŸ₯° It feels too good to read your beautiful comment. I am glad you liked it.

      And yes, finally I could post something atleast. Hope to stay on the track πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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  5. This poem of yours has touched my heart right away, dear Preeths…how beautifully you’ve captured the lows…and then the end with the optimistic note…I’m glad to see you back βœ¨β€οΈπŸ’«πŸ€—

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    1. Thank you dearest Navin πŸ€—πŸ€—. Your immense support is highly appreciated. πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Am glad it touched your heart!

      Finally…I am glad I could come back after a very long break. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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    1. I wish you the sunny morrow. Don’t worry… Life is a puzzle and it all look complicated when we try to solve it but at the end it’s worth after you figure out the picture. Just believe, best things are yet to come. 😍😍

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  6. Beautiful poem, and speaks to true phases of life. I use the word phases because that’s what they are. These phases sharpen our wisdom, desires and ability to strive and thrive. They are places where our life and our intentions get calibrated. Not easy certainly to keep the patience but very important to keep the faith, trust the process.

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    1. Thank you dear Pragalbha. 😍😍 Oh how so beautifully said… I love how you said it so clear and I couldn’t agree more. I really trust that it’s not easy to keep the patience but it’s important to keep the faith. Appreciate your thoughtful comment dear Pragalbha. Your wise words are making you unique. 😍😍

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      1. You are welcome, Preeths!Thank you for your kindness. In fact, I’m also learning from fellow bloggers like you. πŸ˜ŠπŸ’πŸ’–

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      1. A very poignant and beautiful poem, Preethes! Painful as they are, we gain insights and experience from the tough times. I like the optimistic ending of your poem. May you have sunny days ahead. May creativity flow like a fountain! ❀

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