Just don’t give up!

When your heart feels so hefty
And deep inside, you know it’s empty
Just don’t give up, the time you have is plenty!

When you feel like it’s a drought
And if it’s been a hell throughout
Just don’t give up, failures are merely a strike out!

When you forget how to smile
And if it’s really been a while
Just don’t give up, it’s simply an other mile!

When you think your efforts are vain
And if you’re going through so much pain
Just don’t give up, there’s sunshine after the rain!

When you find yourself in trouble
And if it keeps growing double
Just don’t give up, life still has it’s bubble!

Because life is quite a mystery
And you know success doesn’t come free
Just don’t give up, but create your own history!

Offshore Writings

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Published by Offshorewriter

My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

96 thoughts on “Just don’t give up!

    1. Thank you dear Joyce. ❤️❤️
      It’s okie, sometimes I miss many of our fellow bloggers posts too. It happens 😣
      Am glad you liked it, means so much to me. 🤗🤗

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  1. A wonderfully crafted rhyming poem! The message of hope and very empowering! We have different definitions of success, and for me, to do what we are passionate about, is already a great success. Keep on keeping on!

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    1. Thank you dear. You always say the best things. I love how you define success!❤️
      Wisely said 🤝 Thank you so much for spending your time on my posts, it really means a lot!

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  2. What a beautiful poem….uplifting words….it’s like after reading your poem, I feel calm…keep expressing from your heart, dear Preeths ❤️ ✨ 🤗 💫

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  3. Indeed the poem was inspiring and helpful in lighting up the whole mood of any person 😅😅

    “”When you forget how to smile
    And if it’s really been a while
    Just don’t give up, it’s simply an other mile!””
    These lines were too good 👍👍

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  4. A lovely poem, dearest Preeths. Such an important reminder to let life come, just as it is, pause, breathe into it, reflect, and then, as you write, create from there. Your poem reminds me of a portion of my diary entry for tomorrow. How lovely that is. Happy Sunday, my dear friend. ❤️❤️❤️

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  5. Wow my dear Preeths, what an empowering piece!!!! I feel so at peace after reading…you are one beautiful inspirer! The rhyming and soothing flow here is truly a blessing to read! Fantastically weaved, my lovely friend!!! Thank you for another gift 🙏🏻🖤🤗

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    1. Dear Ace, thank you so much. ❣️❣️
      I am glad to know that. Calling me an inspirational feels too good. Am humbled ❤️. You are always the best to always say the nicest things. Thank you dearie. Sending you much love 🤗🤗💐

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  6. You always post on the correct time…each time when i feel like giving up for what i am fighting or just feel thats its enough…ur poems are so so so encouraging…n i get back to work feeling that tomorrow all this will be worth it!

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    1. Awwww……dear, this is the best comment for me today. ❣️❣️ It’s a joy to read that it helped you back up and you feel so encouraging. That’s the whole purpose of this poem. ❤️❤️ Just remember, when the going gets tough…the tough gets going! Hang in there dear, life still has it’s bubble. 🤗🤗

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  7. Woww!! My sweet akka, Are you came from heaven? You’re the gift that god send to me!! Wow wow wow!! I’m flattered by your inspiring poem..! I’m in love with your poems Akka..! Each and everyday your poems are becoming my favourite..! You will never fail to inspire me..! This is a masterpiece piece..! Each and every words are uplifting Akka..! Very powerful..! You made me very strong..! Woww..! I have one award for my Inspiring sista..! The “RHYMING QUEEN AWARD” goes to my lovely sister..!😍🤗
    Akka, you’re an incredible soul..!

    “When you think your efforts are vain
    And if you’re going through so much pain
    Just don’t give up, there’s sunshine after the rain!

    When you find yourself in trouble
    And if it keeps growing double
    Just don’t give up, life still has it’s bubble!”

    Akka, i think I should write your poem here because, I can’t pick my favourite stanza..! Each and every stanzas are so very powerful..! I will save this with me Akka..! You’re an angel..! Awwww!! I don’t even know how to express about your marvellous work..! Such a excellent write Akka..! I’m speechless..! You’re such a sweet and lovely soul..! I’m so lucky to have a inspiring sister like you..! Woww!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT VERY MUCH AKKA..! Sending you lots of love and hugs..!🤗🤗🤗 Have a peaceful and blessed weekend Akka..!💕💕✨💖

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    1. Oh my dear sister, what an incredible comment this is. ❣️❣️ Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the love and support you always have for me. It means a million things to me. 🤗🤗.
      It makes me glad to know that you liked this poem as a whole. I am also glad to read that it inspired you. You are a sweetheart. ❣️❣️ Stay blessed dear. ❤️❤️ Sending you much love 💐

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      1. Wowww!! What a lovely comment!! Akka, you’re truly amazing..! Wowww!! Your words means a lot to me Akka..! You’re very welcome my dear sister..! It’s absolutely my pleasure..! 😊🤗🤗💕💖💖💖

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      1. You have an amazing way with words. Its simple yet powerful and I say this straight from the heart 🙂 I am glad that I read this poem too its been a tuff month but I’m not giving up ❤️❤️

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        1. Dear Daphny, first I thank you for always appreciating my works. ❣️❣️ I am glad that this poem motivated you. Just remember, when the going gets tough, the tough gets going! Hang in there dear, just don’t give up! Sending you strength and prayers. ❤️🤗

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  8. Awww, this is excellent poem filled with powerful positivity. Brilliantly beautiful dear ❤ especially loved this stanza though entire poem is awesome. Be blessed n happy sweet one 😇❤🤗

    When you find yourself in trouble
    And if it keeps growing double
    Just don’t give up, life still has it’s bubble!

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    1. Awww…. thank you dearie. ❣️❣️
      You always have nice things to say. I love your every word. Thank you for supporting my works and for always being there. That really means so much to me. ❣️❣️ Am glad to read those lines , it’s my favourite too. 🤓 Much love dear Suma ❤️❤️😍

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