There were days…

There were days I want to run
And hide myself from every fun

There were days I felt numb
And always preferred to keep mum

There were days I kept falling
And hate to wake up the next morning

There were days I failed to win
And I almost forgot how to grin

There were days I wanted to quit
And didn’t want to try even a bit

Though all the above made me weak
I will break the odds to reach the peak

And so, hardwork is no more a pain
Success is sure going to be mine!

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My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

68 thoughts on “There were days…

  1. I loved the repetition and contrast in this poem – good job on working hard to bring those elements through. Also, you’re very right – no matter how hard or tough things may seem, we can make it through if we just keep fighting and don’t ‘forget how to grin’. I love reading your poetry because it’s always so positive. Thank you so much for sharing πŸ’•

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    1. Thank you dear friend. ❀️❀️ It’s such a bliss to read your motivating comment. I am pleased to know that you liked the repetition and contrast in this poem. It really feels good to read this. πŸ€—πŸ€— I so love to hear from you always. πŸ’œπŸ’œ
      Thank you dear for all the love and support, it means a lot to me πŸ€—

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    1. Oh dear Gabriela, thank you so much. πŸ₯°πŸ₯° A beautiful comment coming from you is such a bliss to read. πŸ€—πŸ€— Thank you always for the love and support. It means so much to me β€οΈπŸ€—

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    1. Thank you dear Cindy. ❀️❀️❀️
      I am more than happy to read your comments whenever you quote your favourite lines here…. πŸ€—πŸ€—
      You are a sweetheart 😍πŸ₯°

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  2. Oh I LOVE this piece. There is such a rhythmic flow here and deep motivation engraved in every line!! The repetition of β€œThere were days” adds such grace and love to this piece, it’s soothing to read!!! Amazingly done, my dear Preeths!! Your poems never fail to inspire and touch me!! πŸ€—πŸ–€πŸ’«

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    1. Oh dear Ace…. You are a beautiful soul to always say positive things. Am inspired by every comment that you leave here. I can’t thank you enough for all the love and support that you show in my every posts. Tons of love my dear Ace 😍😍❀️❀️

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    1. Thank you dear Cheryl. ❀️❀️ That’s one beautiful comment to read today! πŸ€—πŸ€—
      Am glad you liked it! Indeed life has its ups and downs and yet we need to move forward! Sure I am having a β›… day. Hope the same with you. Take care ❀️😍

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  3. Wowww..! Rhyming queen..! Really I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT..! It’s really such a motivating poem Akka..! I loved the line We fall, we rise We fall, we succeed.

    Though all the above made me weak
    I will break the odds to reach the peak

    And so, hardwork is no more a pain
    Success is sure going to be mine!

    I loved these stanzas Akka..! So powerful..! You are awesome..! Keep shinning my dear sista..! Have a beautiful weekend..!β˜ΊοΈπŸ€—β€οΈ

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    1. Thank you Dearie. ❀️❀️❀️
      You are a sweetheart! Your comment is as special as you 😍😍. Thank you for always being there. Am glad you liked the poem. πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. Aww..! You are very welcome Akka.! Absolutely my pleasure.! It’s so awesome to hear from you..! I’m so happy that I special for you..! Sure Akka, I will always be there for you..! β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ€—

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