There were days I want to run
And hide myself from every fun
There were days I felt numb
And always preferred to keep mum
There were days I kept falling
And hate to wake up the next morning
There were days I failed to win
And I almost forgot how to grin
There were days I wanted to quit
And didn’t want to try even a bit
Though all the above made me weak
I will break the odds to reach the peak
And so, hardwork is no more a pain
Success is sure going to be mine!
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Wonderfully written rhyming poem! I like this, though poignant, yet astounding! Keep it up!
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Thank you dearie. ❤️ You always say the nicest things. Am glad you liked it 🤗🤗
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You’re always welcome! You really deserve it. Your writings are like jewels sparkling in this trying times. Keep it up!
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Can’t thank you enough for this appreciation! Your comments are a treasure to me. Sending you loads of love. 😍😍🤗🤗❤️💐
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Thanks much for the inspirations.🥰🥰🥰
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Very inspirational and lovely poem
Keep it up 👏
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Thank you dear. Glad you liked it. 😍😍 Thanks for stopping by
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It’s my pleasure to read
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Hey! I hope you read my post 😘
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I did dear. Thank you for mentioning our blogsite. ❤️❤️❤️ I am glad to read that. You are a sweetheart 😍😍🤗
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I like how your words pierce through bleak realities to provide a source of empowerment for life. 🖤🖤
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Thank you dear Carter 🖤
Means so much to me, thank you for stopping by! 🤝
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Good one!! 😊
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Thank you Arjun.🤝 Am pleased to know that. Thank you for stopping by ❤️
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You are welcome! 🙏😊
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I loved the repetition and contrast in this poem – good job on working hard to bring those elements through. Also, you’re very right – no matter how hard or tough things may seem, we can make it through if we just keep fighting and don’t ‘forget how to grin’. I love reading your poetry because it’s always so positive. Thank you so much for sharing 💕
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Thank you dear friend. ❤️❤️ It’s such a bliss to read your motivating comment. I am pleased to know that you liked the repetition and contrast in this poem. It really feels good to read this. 🤗🤗 I so love to hear from you always. 💜💜
Thank you dear for all the love and support, it means a lot to me 🤗
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So inspiring! Beautiful words!
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Thank you dear. 🤗🤗 Am pleased to know that. You are really kind ❤️❤️
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You’re welcome😀
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“And so, hardwork is no more a pain
Success is sure going to be mine!”
Oh, so inspirational and so beautiful.
xoxo
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Oh dear Gabriela, thank you so much. 🥰🥰 A beautiful comment coming from you is such a bliss to read. 🤗🤗 Thank you always for the love and support. It means so much to me ❤️🤗
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My pleasure. It is always a joy to read you. Sending plenty of love 🌸🥰🌹❤️🌸🥰🌹
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Success is sure be on your side! ♥️♥️
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Thank you dear Ash. ❤️❤️
That’s so kind of you to say! Happy week ahead 🤝
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Most welcome. My pleasure ♥️♥️
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True motivational poem 🙂🙏💐
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Beautiful and heartfelt. Have a lovely day Preeths! ❤️🌹💐🙏🎁😊
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Thank you dear Diana. ❤️❤️ I am pleased to know this and that makes me feel good. 😍😍 Have a lovely day dear.
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This is such a beautiful poem. Lovely 🌹
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Thank you dear Vignesh. ❤️❤️ Am pleased to know that. Thanks for your kind comment 🤗
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Welcome 🙂
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Yes “just one more step” is the mantra for reaching only a bit out of where we are and nothing can be in the way of what is your! Awesome poem and spirit 💛✨
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Thank you once again dear Pragalbha. ❤️❤️
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great poem of perseverance Preteths and staying the course. Love it and this line:
“I will break the odds to reach the peak”
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Thank you dear Cindy. ❤️❤️❤️
I am more than happy to read your comments whenever you quote your favourite lines here…. 🤗🤗
You are a sweetheart 😍🥰
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You’re sooo welcome Ru!!!💖
Loved it❣️
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That’s amazing Poem dear, wish you all the success n happiness in life. Happy smiles 😇🧡🥰
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Thank you Dearie. ❤️❤️ To start my day with your wishes is a blessing. 😍😍
Happy Sunday 🤗😍
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My pleasure, happy Sunday dear one 😇❣
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Oh I LOVE this piece. There is such a rhythmic flow here and deep motivation engraved in every line!! The repetition of “There were days” adds such grace and love to this piece, it’s soothing to read!!! Amazingly done, my dear Preeths!! Your poems never fail to inspire and touch me!! 🤗🖤💫
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Oh dear Ace…. You are a beautiful soul to always say positive things. Am inspired by every comment that you leave here. I can’t thank you enough for all the love and support that you show in my every posts. Tons of love my dear Ace 😍😍❤️❤️
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Loved it Preeths…really motivating🤗🤗🌹
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Thank you dearest Anan. 😍😍 Am glad you liked it. You comment is as special as you!! ❤️❤️
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A very empowering poem, Preeths. Beautifully written. Here’s to breaking the odds and making dreams come true.
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Thank you dear Shweta. Am pleased to hear that. ❤️❤️ Thank you for the sweetest wishes… It’s truly motivating!
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You are very welcome, dear! ❤😊
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i cant express how good it felt to read this!!!
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Awww….. Thank you Dearie. ❤️❤️ That feels great to hear. 🤗🤗 Am glad you liked it. 😍😍
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That’s the spirit. With hardwork, success will always be yours ❣️
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Thank you dear Radhika. That’s right, with hard by work, success is not too far to achieve ❤️❤️
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Awww … Thank you dear Riya. ❤️❤️
How can I thank you enough? It makes me feel good when I read this. 😍😍
Much love 🤗🤗
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Do I really need to compliment this poem queen?
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Spot on rhyme and message!👌👌
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Thank you so much, I am pleased to know that. You are dearest! ❤️❤️🤗🤗
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Last three lines are truly inspiring! Well done 👍
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Thank you Mr KK. 🤝 I am pleased to know that. It really means so much to me 🤗. Thanks for the support that keeps me motivating! 😊
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You’re welcome, my friend 😊
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That’s the spirit! Loved the positive ending ♥♥
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Thank you Dearie. 😍😍 Am glad you liked it. ❤️❤️
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Loved it ♥♥
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❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗
Thank you once again!
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A really motivating poem! Rhyming scheme is also great!❤️
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Thank you dear Kushi. 😍😍 Your comments is always motivating. ❤️❤️ Glad you liked it 🤗🤗
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My pleasure❤️
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Very engaging, lighthearted poem, Preethes. Though it is cute, it has a message as well. We all need to know that life has its ups and downs. ❤ Hope your day is sunny! 🙂
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Thank you dear Cheryl. ❤️❤️ That’s one beautiful comment to read today! 🤗🤗
Am glad you liked it! Indeed life has its ups and downs and yet we need to move forward! Sure I am having a ⛅ day. Hope the same with you. Take care ❤️😍
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Wowww..! Rhyming queen..! Really I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT..! It’s really such a motivating poem Akka..! I loved the line We fall, we rise We fall, we succeed.
Though all the above made me weak
I will break the odds to reach the peak
And so, hardwork is no more a pain
Success is sure going to be mine!
I loved these stanzas Akka..! So powerful..! You are awesome..! Keep shinning my dear sista..! Have a beautiful weekend..!☺️🤗❤️
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Thank you Dearie. ❤️❤️❤️
You are a sweetheart! Your comment is as special as you 😍😍. Thank you for always being there. Am glad you liked the poem. 🤗🤗
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Aww..! You are very welcome Akka.! Absolutely my pleasure.! It’s so awesome to hear from you..! I’m so happy that I special for you..! Sure Akka, I will always be there for you..! ❤️❤️🤗
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Nice poem💖💖
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Thank you Soni ❤️❤️
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