Dear fellow bloggers, this poem is written in contrast to the yesterday’s post written by offshorewriter – “Dear Romeo, I am no Juliet!“. Please do read it if you haven’t yet. You can expect similar follow up posts on the way! ๐
Okay, so here we go…
Words can never express,
The love that I have for you, Princess.
You know, that I would never let you down,
Even if I were about to drown.
I will bring down heaven,
Or cross the seas seven,
And walkthrough the land of the unforgiven,
Just to be in your loving arms.
Don’t you worry about me,
You’ve got to stay bold, my honeybee.
All we need is a little more time,
And things would fall perfectly as this rhyme.
Do you miss me?
I wanna write “I miss you” on a brick,
And throw it on you,
Just to show how much it hurts.
I wish all of these were true,
I know, you don’t have a clue,
What I got to do now, is pursue,
But dear Juliet, I’m your Romeo!
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Romeo and Juliet such a perfect love poem๐
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Haha yeah..! This poem was inspired from yesterday’s poem.. I’m glad you liked both.. ๐๐
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Yes I loved them both they were truly amazing
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And I am your Juliet
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Lovely poems
Perfect ๐๐ฝ
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Haha.. ๐ thank you May.. I’m glad you liked it..
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Such a beautiful poem!! I loved every single line… it was soo Rhyming which made it awesome!!โคโคโค๐ฅฐ
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Thank you nushhe..! I’m glad you liked it.. stay tuned for more..
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Awesome piece!!
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Thank you Harsh..! ๐๐
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WOW!! This is simply sublime, what an excellent contrast to yesterdayโs!!! The love here is palpable and you painted the picture beautifully!! And that rhyming is just incredible; overall, such a great piece!! Much love ๐ค๐ค
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Wow.. thank you for the beautiful comment.. glad you liked the poem.. I got the inspiration from yesterday’s poem… So I thought to inverse the theme..
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Of course!!! The pair of these poems is marvelous, well done to both of you ๐ค๐ค
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Amazing!
The contrast is awesome!
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Thank you Akshita.. glad you liked it.. ๐๐
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Wow! Loved itโค
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Hello Ramya..! Glad you liked it.. ! Hoping to write more like this…keep supporting..
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Loved the striking contrast here ๐๐๐
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Hello Vani.. thank you for the comment.. glad you liked the poem.. !
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Wow so very well done, beautiful!! :)))
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Thank you so much..!!
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Oh that brick would definitely hurt!!! Good follow up poem yo the prev one ๐ฌ
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To*
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Haha yeah.. it would hurt..
And yes it is a follow up poem.. got inspired from the prev poem.. ๐๐
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Beautiful poem!!
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Thank you..!!
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Nice follow up Sam and I sure hope that brick doesn’t make it here.
OUCH… ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐ท๐ท๐ท๐ท๐ท
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Haha lol.. Ouch… ๐๐ thank you Cindy..! ๐๐
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๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ Your always welcome Sam! ๐คโค๏ธ๐ค
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Oh, this is amazing!
And the rhymings are beautiful, Bro! โค๏ธ
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Thank you sis..!! ๐
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It’s simply beautiful
Powerfulโ๐ป๐๐ป
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Thank you Athira..! Keep supporting..!
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Thank you Athira..! Keep supporting..!
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Most welcome..Sure..๐๐ปโ๐ป
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Cool, but let them Juliet allow the Romeo express himself with no doubt
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Amazing poem absolutely loved itโคโคโค
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Lovely poem Lawrence. But, really…throw a brick at Juliet….oh boy I need to give you some tips now ๐
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Okay. But don’t throw a brick! ๐
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Really heartfelt words. ๐ค
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