I tried and tried
Tried to stand up
Up and pretend
Pretend that I smile
Smile even when it pains!
I kept crying
Crying when no one is around
Around with bitter memories
Memories of you that pricks
Pricks every single second!
I knew you were gone
Gone before I realized
Realized that I am alone
Alone in the middle of the sea
Sea that pulls me to drown!
I blame myself
Myself for this break
Break that I didn’t wish
Wish if it’s only a dream
Dream that I can forget!
But oh it’s not
Not a dream in real
Real love that died
Died after you left
Left me alone to die!
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True that. ππ Thank you dear Akshita β€οΈ
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My pleasure ππ
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Reall good poem my dear !!! But keep trying you are so wonderful and sweet !! Lots of love my dear!!β€β€β€β€β€πΉπΉπΉ
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Awww…. Thank you sweetie. You are an angel. πππ Am glad you liked it. ππππΉπΉπΉ
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I love your blog my dear ππ€©π€©π€©π€©ππππΉπΉπΉ
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That’s so kind of you to say. All love to you ππππ
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Oh my sweetie, I not being kind… I am only saying the truth πΉπΉπΉπΉππππ
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Loved it..much love to uππββ
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Thank you dearest Anan. Your constant support is my motivation. Love and hugs πππ€π€
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Loved it! π₯°π₯°
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My dearest little sister… Thank you. You are a sweetheart ππππΉπΉ
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Anytime big sis! you too ππ
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Amazing poem friend!!! I love the style and it just flows perfectly!! This is absolutely beautiful, keep shining friend π€π€
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Aww… Thank you dear Ace. I am glad you noticed the style that I tried for the first time. πππ You are so loved π€π
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Oops, missed this!!! It is incredibly well done, inspires me as a poet and a person!!! Awe π€, you are loved by many too π€π€π€
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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Thank you for the Reblog. π€
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Beautiful write as always! π
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Thank you dear D. Means so much to me πππΉπΉ
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Of course!π
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So beautifulπ
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Thank you Faith. Am glad you liked it. β€οΈβ€οΈ And thanks for stopping by πΉπ
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Anytimeβ€
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Excellent piece. Sending plenty of love.
xoxo
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Wow, thank you dearest Gabriela. Your comment is the sweetest. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Xoxo
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My pleasure πΉβ€οΈ
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What a great job depicting such heartbreak sound so real Preethes!
But I do think I and hope I know differently that it is just very well fictional poem you delivered so well. πβ€οΈ
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Thank you Cindy. You got it right π€. It’s purely fiction. And you know, sometime poems just flow without reasons. And this is one of a kind. Am glad you didn’t think otherwise. You are my favourite. β€οΈβ€οΈπ€π€π€
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You’re welcome! You did a great job on it and it’s so great when they just come so naturally. Love that and no I figured as much. Awww and you mine. Have the best night! πβ€οΈ
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you dear Ariela. Thanks for stopping by π₯°π₯°
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The last stanza has all my πππ
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Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Oh my God! This is wonderful!ππππ
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Thank you dear Ramya. This means so much to me β€οΈβ€οΈ
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So beautifully composed – the drowning, the grief, the longing so well conveyed.
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Thank you Pragalbha. πππ
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Love the loop effect Preeths .. flows through so well.. nicely done!
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Thank you Hs. Just gave it a try. And am glad to hear that it came out well β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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I really enjoyed your poetry, my dear friend, both words and form ~ thank you for sharing & have a lovely day ππ€πΉ
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Thank you dear Phil. It means a lot to me β€οΈβ€οΈ I am pleased that you liked it
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The Helplessness amidst the chaos! Embrace the sea, sunshine,sunset,breeze,the silence,the chaos.this too shall pass.
-safaniya field,saudi offshore.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. I so agree that this too shall pass π. Thank you for stopping by β€οΈ
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Brilliant poetry of a style that i have never seen before, absolutely love this, thank you my lovely blog friend.
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Thank you Jack. I am pleased that you noticed it. π And many thanks for your lovely comment. You made my day β£οΈβ£οΈ
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These words are full of feelings. π€π€ Liked the flow to them.
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Thank you dear Carter. π€π€ Am glad you liked it
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