I tried and tried
Tried to stand up
Up and pretend
Pretend that I smile
Smile even when it pains!
I kept crying
Crying when no one is around
Around with bitter memories
Memories of you that pricks
Pricks every single second!
I knew you were gone
Gone before I realized
Realized that I am alone
Alone in the middle of the sea
Sea that pulls me to drown!
I blame myself
Myself for this break
Break that I didn’t wish
Wish if it’s only a dream
Dream that I can forget!
But oh it’s not
Not a dream in real
Real love that died
Died after you left
Left me alone to die!
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A heart achingly beautiful poem, dearest Preeths. The emotion comes though deeply, and is so wonderfully created. Just lovely. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you dear Jeff. That’s so kind of you to say. It’s such a bliss to read your beautiful comments everytime. ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗
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You’re most welcome, dearest Preeths. Is always my pleasure. Bliss to read you here too. ❤❤❤❤
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Thanks for your like of my post, “Salvation In Christ . The Book Of John 1:24-28 . 26 A.D.;” you are very kind.
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I love this writing. Your heart is genuine, and genuinely afflected by those of whom may prick your heart with indifference or insincerity.
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This sounds like a time of my life; not a good one.
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Oh, am sorry to hear that dear. Take care of yourself ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you. I think that many of us experience such of these times in life.
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True dear. I so agree with what you say. 🤝
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If only we could talk about this lol
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Can feel the pain. Amazing writing!
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Thank you dear Harsh. I am pleased that you liked it. ❤️❤️❤️
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Ah, the pains of heartbreak and a breakup…..well captured Preeths. I enjoyed reading this. Love and hugs. 🙂
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Thank you dear Ru. You are too sweet to catch up all my posts whenever you can. 🥰🥰 And that makes you special to me. Love and hugs 🤗❤️
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Love and hugs right back at you Sweetie 🎀💗🎀😘💗🎀💗
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Memories of you that pricks
Pricks every single second!
Your words resonate with me. 💕💕
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Thank you dear Akanksha. Am pleased that you liked it. ❤️❤️
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These words are full of feelings. 🖤🖤 Liked the flow to them.
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Thank you dear Carter. 🖤🖤 Am glad you liked it
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Brilliant poetry of a style that i have never seen before, absolutely love this, thank you my lovely blog friend.
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Thank you Jack. I am pleased that you noticed it. 😊 And many thanks for your lovely comment. You made my day ❣️❣️
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The Helplessness amidst the chaos! Embrace the sea, sunshine,sunset,breeze,the silence,the chaos.this too shall pass.
-safaniya field,saudi offshore.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. I so agree that this too shall pass 🙌. Thank you for stopping by ❤️
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I really enjoyed your poetry, my dear friend, both words and form ~ thank you for sharing & have a lovely day 😊🤗🌹
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Thank you dear Phil. It means a lot to me ❤️❤️ I am pleased that you liked it
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Love the loop effect Preeths .. flows through so well.. nicely done!
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Thank you Hs. Just gave it a try. And am glad to hear that it came out well ❤️❤️❤️
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So beautifully composed – the drowning, the grief, the longing so well conveyed.
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Thank you Pragalbha. 😍😍😍
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Oh my God! This is wonderful!👏👏👏👏
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Thank you dear Ramya. This means so much to me ❤️❤️
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you dear Ariela. Thanks for stopping by 🥰🥰
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😊
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The last stanza has all my 💗💗💗
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Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it ❤️❤️❤️
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What a great job depicting such heartbreak sound so real Preethes!
But I do think I and hope I know differently that it is just very well fictional poem you delivered so well. 💖❤️
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Thank you Cindy. You got it right 🤝. It’s purely fiction. And you know, sometime poems just flow without reasons. And this is one of a kind. Am glad you didn’t think otherwise. You are my favourite. ❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗
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You’re welcome! You did a great job on it and it’s so great when they just come so naturally. Love that and no I figured as much. Awww and you mine. Have the best night! 💖❤️
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Excellent piece. Sending plenty of love.
xoxo
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Wow, thank you dearest Gabriela. Your comment is the sweetest. ❤️❤️❤️ Xoxo
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My pleasure 🌹❤️
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So beautiful👏
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Thank you Faith. Am glad you liked it. ❤️❤️ And thanks for stopping by 🌹😍
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Anytime❤
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Beautiful write as always! 💕
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Thank you dear D. Means so much to me 😍😍🌹🌹
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Of course!💕
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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Thank you for the Reblog. 🤝
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Amazing poem friend!!! I love the style and it just flows perfectly!! This is absolutely beautiful, keep shining friend 🖤🤗
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Aww… Thank you dear Ace. I am glad you noticed the style that I tried for the first time. 😍😍😍 You are so loved 🤗😍
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Oops, missed this!!! It is incredibly well done, inspires me as a poet and a person!!! Awe 🖤, you are loved by many too 🖤🤗🤗
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Loved it! 🥰🥰
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My dearest little sister… Thank you. You are a sweetheart 😍😍😍🌹🌹
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Anytime big sis! you too 😘💕
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😘😘😍😍🤗🤗❤️
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Loved it..much love to u💓💓⚘⚘
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Thank you dearest Anan. Your constant support is my motivation. Love and hugs 😍😍🤗🤗
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Reall good poem my dear !!! But keep trying you are so wonderful and sweet !! Lots of love my dear!!❤❤❤❤❤🌹🌹🌹
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Awww…. Thank you sweetie. You are an angel. 😍😍😍 Am glad you liked it. 😍😍😍🌹🌹🌹
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I love your blog my dear 😍🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘🌹🌹🌹
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That’s so kind of you to say. All love to you 😍😍😍😍
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Oh my sweetie, I not being kind… I am only saying the truth 🌹🌹🌹🌹😘😘😘😘
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😍😍🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘
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All my love to you beautiful human being 🤩🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😘😘😘🌹
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Betrayed but I refuse to be broken!
Nice one!!
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True that. 🙌🙌 Thank you dear Akshita ❤️
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My pleasure 😊😊
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😍🤗
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