Living on the edge is life’s play
Facing the challenges day by day!
Sometimes your tears won’t dry
Life has not one but many why’s!
Ups and downs come in your life
Sorrows cuts your heart just like a knife!
Where are all the good times? you cry
If life is hard and will you die?
Pain gets practice as the days go by
Life’s a dazzling puzzle and we don’t know why!
Offshore Writings
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Wonderful poem ๐๐ค
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Thank you Sir. Means a lot to me. ๐
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Beautiful one..
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Thank you dear Athira. ๐๐
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Most welcome ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Good one. Enjoyed your writing.
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Thank you Ramya. Coming from you is a honour for me. ๐โค๏ธ
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๐คญ๐คI don’t know what I did to deserve this statement. Thank you๐ค
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You are great writer and I said it already. โค๏ธ๐ค
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Humbled ๐
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Wonderful poem!โค
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Thank you Nawaz. I am glad you liked it. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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So true!! Awesome๐๐ป๐๐ปโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you dear Soni. ๐๐
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Rukky. ๐
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So true!!
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Thank you Efrona. I am glad you stopped by! โค๏ธ
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Lovely!!
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Thank you โค๏ธโค๏ธKim.
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Beautiful and rhymings as usual!โค๏ธ
Life and knife what an irony Sissy๐โค๏ธ
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Thank you dear sissy. ๐
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True…I agree ๐
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Thank you Dulcy. Am glad you agreed. ๐๐
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Love the flow of this poem ๐
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Thank you Joana. It means a lot to me. ๐๐
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I love the playful nature of the poem. It’s beautiful.
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My fav poet…. Thank you so much. It means a lotttttt to me. ๐๐๐๐๐
Love love much love! ๐ฅฐ๐โค๏ธ๐ฅฐ๐
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My pleasure. You are too kind . Plenty of love to you too โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Such depth in this poem Preeths….lovely. I’m sure it resonates with everyone on some level. It can be interpreted in so many meaningful but absolutely different ways….I love such poems that are open to multiple impactful interactions…..Beautifully penned dear ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ
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Thank you my dearest Ruel. โค๏ธโค๏ธYou always have the nicest things to say to motivate me. Love you for your friendship that always bring smiles to my face in your every comment. ๐๐
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I say nice things because you truly are talented dear……its been a lovely journey here on WP and (surprisingly)making some real good friends like you…..๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐ฅฐ
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Hugs hugs! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ค๐ค
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So well written. Itโs so true that pain becomes a practice
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Thank you Happy Soul. And it’s true for many of us. ๐
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That’s such a poignant poem, especially considering where we are now. Wonderfully penned!๐
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Thank you dear. That’s a wonderful comment. โค๏ธโค๏ธ How should I name you except for the dear? ๐๐ค๐ฅฐ
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My pleasure!
Please call me D!๐
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Awww… That feels so close๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ.
D for dear again! ๐๐
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It’s a coincidence๐ My real name does begin with a D.
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It is indeed a puzzle and there’s really no answer to our why๐ we just spend our lives searching for an answer to that why but how lovely if we could just accept the why and believe, it just has to this way. ๐๐๐ท
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What a beautiful say! ๐๐ Thank you Samreen for sharing your lovely thought. It’s indeed good if we could just accept the why’s and believe whatever comes our way! ๐๐
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Very well written, Offshorewriter! “You don’t know whether to laugh or cry!” as my mother used to say. โค Take care!
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Thank you Cheryl. True that sometimes we don’t know whether to laugh or cry. ๐๐
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