If the world goes mute, and if I shout out loud;
You still can’t hear me because
it’s a dead wish already!
If flowers stay fresh, and if I present you a bunch!
You still won’t get it because
it’s a dead wish already!
If tress won’t breeze, and if I blow like a wind;
You still won’t feel me because
it’s a dead wish already!
If rain doesn’t pour, and if I my tears downpour;
You still can’t hear me because
it’s a dead wish already!
If death comes late, and if I still live on this earth;
Yet you cannot reach because the me inside is dead already!
Offshore Writings
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Wow, you really got the melancholic tone to resonate here. Beautifully written and composed! I really admire the thought behind this one ❤️
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Thank you Rishika. Your comment is so valuable! 🥰🥰 Am glad you liked it. Your constant support is my motivation! Sending you much love….💕💕
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Let all dead wishes born again soon 🙂
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Thank you dear Athira. But this is 💯 imagination! Thank you for your concern. All my poems are mostly imagination and very few poems, I write from my experiences! Stay blessed. 💕💕
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Yes I knew..but your poem is alive..
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Aww… That’s a huge compliment. Loved your comment. 😍😍😍😍
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Vivid imagination nicely written 👍🤝
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Thank you Sir. Glad you appreciated the poem! 😊
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So powerful yet delicate emotions, its really magnificent, you are so talented, it just reflects in each and every posts of yours. Keep writing this way 👍🏻👍🏻
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Awwwww…. That’s a huge compliment from you. And I am so humbled by your appreciation! Thank you Dulcy for being there to always motivate me. 💕💕
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Will always be there 😊
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🤗🤗 sending you much love! 💕
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Beautifully composed. Wish all the wishes are live in these times! ❤️
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Thank you Ash. Am so glad you liked this poem and for leaving a wonderful comment. 💕
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You’re so welcome and my pleasure reading! ❤️❤️😊
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WoW some powerful emotions and expressions there!! This may be a new favourite!!
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Awwwww… You are cute to always say this! ❤️❤️ Much love!
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A powerful poem
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Thank you dear. Am glad you felt so. 💕
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A powerful work!
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Thank you Nawaz. Am glad you said so. ❤️❤️
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I would hate having your silence echo…
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That’s a wonderful line! Thanks dear for sharing it with me. ❤️
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Wow! This is quite deep! Very well composed
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Thank you dear HS. Am glad you appreciated. 😍💕
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Wow!! A really powerful poem!
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Thank you Adarsh. I am so humbled by your compliment. 🥰
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Amazing!!🔥🔥
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Thank you Babe. ❤️❤️
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You have exceptional way of writing. 👏..keep reading, keep writing 👍
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Awwww… Thank you dear for your wonderful comment. I am so humbled and honoured. ❤️❤️💕💕
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You are welcome 🤗
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Amazing 💙
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Thank you Era. This means a lot to me! ❤️❤️
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Pleasure 😊
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Amazing. Love the tone and flow. 💕💕
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Thank you Sobia. Glad you loved it! 💕💕
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✨ you have a way with words ✨ this is beautifully haunting and each line resonates deeply 💖
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Thank you Hannah. Am glad you stopped by and leaving a deeply meaningful comment. This means a lot to me! 💕💕
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You are more most welcome my friend! It’s a pleasure to be able to read your posts 🤗🥰
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🤗😍
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Wow, that is a gorgeous write ❤️
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Thank you dear. Am glad you appreciated. ❤️
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Beautifully written ❤️
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Thank you Asthaisa. ❤️
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Omg..that hits different
Penned so well..!🙂💐
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Thank you dear Akshita. Sorry for replying late and for some reason your comment hid in spam and I just checked. Sorry if I missed out any of your previous comments like this. 😢 Your constant support is my motivation. ❤️💕
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Always a great pleasure Preeth. 🤗
It’s okay, can happen..(though not sure of the reason😅)
Have a great day ahead 💖
And your constant support is mine..!🥰💕
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Amazing
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Thank you Soni. ❤️💕
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Heartfelt words. 🖤
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Thank you Carter. Am glad you stopped by! 😊
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Great work as always.
This post is truly above and beyond!
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart! 💕🤗 Am glad you liked it.
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It’s my pleasure ☺️
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Interesting how feelings of death can enter into a relationship.
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