You said your heart found
A soulmate to be crowned!
You said I will be pretty
Until I turn sixty!
I blushed in all your word
Being with you I always yearned!
I loved you more day by day
Hundred years I used to pray!
But I knew not, this goes in vain
And you gave me so much pain!
When you said so many lies
I wish I should have been more wise!
And I don’t wish to live this hell
Here I send you my last farewell!
Good bye dove
My dead love!
Offshore Writings
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Beautifully written πππ₯Ίπ₯Ί
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Thank you Asthaisa. β€οΈ
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Very emotional piece which is beautifully written ππ»ππ»
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Thank you Dulcy. It means a lot to me! π
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Heartbreakingπ but beautifulβ¨
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Thank you Komal. Glad you stopped by! π
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Well penned emotions π
I’m sad you’ve to go through the heartbreak!
Heartbreaks are very painful! Whether it’s from anybody!! The trust is a very strong phenomenon and when it breaks.. It leaves its imprints forever!
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Thank you Ashee. And this is purely imagination! π And it’s true π are painful.
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Oh then… It’s good ππ»
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Beautiful lines with full of emotionsππ
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Thank you dear. it means a lot to me! π
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Beautiful piece of writing β€οΈ
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Thank you Ash. Glad you liked it! π
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Yes indeed. Felt every emotions!
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Profound, deep and gorgeous writing. β€οΈ
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Thank you dear Rishika. That means a lot to me. ππ
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Heartbreaking yet beautifully written!
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Thank you Leif! Glad you appreciated. β€οΈ
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This rhyming is heartbreaking!!πβ€οΈ
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Beautiful Piece.
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Thank you dear. π€π
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Beautifully expressed…painful
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