You never said you will leave
And I can’t resist but to grieve
I am hiding from the sunshine
But I am acting like I am fine
Did you forget the promise that we made
And how did our love completely fade?
I could have ask you to stay
But there’s nothing left to say
My world just fell apart
But stay away I can still have a fresh start!
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One deserves a fresh start after an ordeal such as this. Chin up🙏
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Hi dear, thank you for giving it a read and for connecting with us! 💕 Stay tuned with Offshore Writings.
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My pleasure. Cant wait for more
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Wow I could totally relate to it right now. Its awesome
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Thank you Angel. I am glad you could relate. Also thank you for stopping by! 💖
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When our world seems to fall apart, we can always choose to fall apart with it, or have a fresh start.
Thanks so much for that☺️☺️❤️
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🥰🥰
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Heartfelt one❤️💔….
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Thank you Babe. 💖🥰
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Lovely poem.👌
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Thank you Sir. Thanks for leaving a comment. It means a lot to me. 🙂
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Yah , Amazing 😍
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Thank you Archana. Thanks for stopping by! 😍
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you Aashi. 🥰🥰
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🤩
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Omg…each word hits differently..!
Such a beautiful piece..!😁🦋
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Awwww… That’s so nice to hear. Thank you dear. Am glad you liked it! 😍💖
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A great pleasure 🙂🦋
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And how did our love completely fade ?
Loved it 💖😇
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Thank you Ash for pointing out a line. And your valuable comment 8s treasured! 💖🥰
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You’re most welcome 😊
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That’s the spirit.
I can relate it, sometimes even we can’t understand when and how our love just fade away. Whom we used to love the most one they become a stranger for us. Neither we care for them nor they care for us. Everything seems to be just went to the finish line.
🤷🤷🤷😇♥️🌸🧚♀️
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Awww… I am so glad that you took the deep meaning of this poem and could relate it. It’s true that once loved later becomes faded. Thank you Love for dropping your comment. I treasure it. 😍💖
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जब इश्क़ मुकम्मल मंज़िल तक ना पहुंच पाए
तो उसे एक खूबसूरत मोड़ पर छोड़ देना ही आशिक़ी है 😇♥️🌸🧚♀️
Have a fun Sunday 😇♥️🌸🧚♀️
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I’m not sure if you understand hindi ???
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That’s true. 💯 Why did I took so long to reply this message? Any guesses?
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Hindi???? Maybe you are a non hindi speaker.
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You scored 💯. 😊😊
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So did you get the translation?
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Yes I did!! ✌️
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Impressive ☺️☺️☺️😇♥️🌸🧚♀️
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I also want to know the translation. 🙆🙆🙆
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You don’t believe me that I read? 😥😥😥
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That’s no what I meant.🙅🙅 I just want to know the translation. It’s a line from a famous hindi/urdu poet. I was just curious. How it’ll be in English.
But that’s okay I’ll translate it by myself.
I’ve improved my English these days 😜😜😜😜😜😜
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Oh… I didn’t mean it other way! I will send you dear love. But wait…
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Relax don’t take it seriously. Let me tell you. I am shinchan I only like to fool around with people. I was just kidding.
Don’t ever take me seriously 😜😜😜
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When Ishq did not reach the destination So it is necessary to leave it at a beautiful point.
But I think it’s not the exact translation. And I understand इश्क़ means love.
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This lines are beautiful in English too. 😍😍😍
Our Urdu and Hindi poets are truly impressive.👌👌
English also. But I don’t know much about English poets and poems.🙄
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Compromise? 💁
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Love the hope in the last line!❤️
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My dear Happy soul, thank you so much.
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❤️❤️❤️
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