Fresh start!

Posted byOffshorewriterPosted inPoemTags:,

You never said you will leave
And I can’t resist but to grieve

I am hiding from the sunshine
But I am acting like I am fine

Did you forget the promise that we made
And how did our love completely fade?

I could have ask you to stay
But there’s nothing left to say

My world just fell apart
But stay away I can still have a fresh start!

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My Passion for writing unfolded during this lockdown, and here I am a blogger toady!

43 thoughts on “Fresh start!”

  10. That’s the spirit.
    I can relate it, sometimes even we can’t understand when and how our love just fade away. Whom we used to love the most one they become a stranger for us. Neither we care for them nor they care for us. Everything seems to be just went to the finish line.
    🤷🤷🤷😇♥️🌸🧚‍♀️

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    1. Awww… I am so glad that you took the deep meaning of this poem and could relate it. It’s true that once loved later becomes faded. Thank you Love for dropping your comment. I treasure it. 😍💖

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      1. जब इश्क़ मुकम्मल मंज़िल तक ना पहुंच पाए
        तो उसे एक खूबसूरत मोड़ पर छोड़ देना ही आशिक़ी है 😇♥️🌸🧚‍♀️
        Have a fun Sunday 😇♥️🌸🧚‍♀️

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              6. That’s no what I meant.🙅🙅 I just want to know the translation. It’s a line from a famous hindi/urdu poet. I was just curious. How it’ll be in English.
                But that’s okay I’ll translate it by myself.
                I’ve improved my English these days 😜😜😜😜😜😜

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              8. Relax don’t take it seriously. Let me tell you. I am shinchan I only like to fool around with people. I was just kidding.
                Don’t ever take me seriously 😜😜😜

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              9. When Ishq did not reach the destination So it is necessary to leave it at a beautiful point.

                But I think it’s not the exact translation. And I understand इश्क़ means love.

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              10. This lines are beautiful in English too. 😍😍😍
                Our Urdu and Hindi poets are truly impressive.👌👌
                English also. But I don’t know much about English poets and poems.🙄

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